Tales of Amakna Ok, this is my first topic I have strted myself, so don't blame me if it isn't very good.

Anyone who wants to join can, at any point. Please make a character profile using the following format:

Character name: Shamrock
Class: Iop
Character age: 23
Height: 6' 3"
Rank (if in an army/militia): Sergent; Amakna Militia
Distinguishing characteristics: Followed by his faithful bwak, Benjamin; Carries a Pink Claw everywhere

Also, proper grammar and punctuation is greatly appreciated.

The first thing that greeted me as I woke up in the castle barracks was King Alister's page, a young xelor, standing over me holding a letter. "King Alister requests that you gather the troops in the courtyard, he has an announcement to make." Wonderful, probably another stupid quest for a Dofus, I thought as I gathered my gear. Ringing the bell, I assembled the troops in the main courtyard in front of the King's palace. "His Majesty has an announcement to make," I told the groggy troops. "So you all need to pay close attention and be very quiet!" Suddenly, King Alister appeared on his balcony, looking extremely disconsolate. I could immediately tell that this would not be about a Dofus. "Attention, my loyal soldiers," he began. "I have some terrible news. The Brakmarians have announced that they will be going to war against us. The Bontarians have not sent a reply to my message, so we cannot expect any aid. Immediately begin to fortify the city and gather supplies for a seige. We have estimated that the Brakmarians will be here in a week. You have your orders, now go prepare for war." With that, the solemn king stalked back into his chambers.

This post has been edited by Derdikol: 24 Aug 2009, 04:42

Name: Blood-lover
Class: Sram
Character Age: Unknown
Rank: Swears to loyalty to no one
Characteristics: Does what ever needed to survive. Is completely black

It was the dark of night in Bonta. The barkmariens had taken over the entire city. But what happened to the bontas, that old man, what was his name, he recruited new bontas that's all I know, he owed me my mil kamas! Then a thought struck me, If the Bark took the city, then they could take the entire world. Don't get me wrong, Im no fan of those angles but the Barks are just... Pure Evil. I crept in to milta, Oto Mustan! The Oto Mustan, I realised it was his Son Johnny Mustan. I over heard that the old man was being kept in Barkmar. It would be suicide to go there alone. I needed help, The Amakna castle, had fine men... They could distract the guards, and die of course, while I sneak in there and safe the Old man. It was worth a try, but first I'd have to save them...

This post has been edited by simomate: 24 Aug 2009, 08:40

You got someone continuing the thread derk so post!

I was surprised to see a female sram talking to a couple of my best sacriers. "Hey, you! Sram! What do you think you're doing?" She must have been up to no good, because she ran off towards the exit. That night at dinner, I searched for my sacriers, but they were nowhere to be found. Great, I thought. That sram lured them away for some evil purpose.

Ah yes... I fooled those sacriers, but what of That Iop, he saw me, and seemed to hate me yes... but I could use him, even if he doesn't realise it. I left a Note on his desk, "Sham, meet me at the edge of evil forest at 3pm, don't be late..." As for the 3 sacriers, they were made to sacifised right? So they should have no problem, as long as they don't find out who I am.
"Alright men," I said, "We are going to barkmar, to save a few people from slavery, we MUST convince that Iop to come so.." I handed them blue uniform, "He must not see me, you guys are gonna convince him to help, by pretending to be officals..."

Name: Kissme-Mama (Call me Mama)
Class: Eni
Age: 256
Rank: Holy person

Every eni knew, that by this time toomorrow only one eni would be left. Turned out to me, Im the Chosen Girl? I dunno, where to start. I guess I could go to bonta first, passed through Amakman Castle, and found, they were preparing for war against the barks, and bonta wouldn't be helping them. Amkama castle was important, it united all bontas, and barks together. It was my duty as the Chosen Girl, to help them.
"How can I help?" I asked the king

Name:totoquil

Class:Osamoda

Rank:liutenant; bonta militia

Characteristics:Is always followed by a loyal gobtubby; wears a livitinem hat

"Sargeant Shamrock my name is totoquil and im a liutenant sent from bonta along with 20 xelor, 15 sacriers, 10 iops, 15 pandawas, 25 eniripsas, 15 enutrofs, 10 srams, 15 osamodas, 20 cras, 15 sadidas, 15 ecaflips, and 15 fecas" I told Shamrock. "I hope these troops help you defending the castle".

This post has been edited by totoquil: 13 Sep 2009, 05:45

"Ah, finally, Bonta has sent reinforcements."

"Sergent, we are not reinforcements, we are all that is left of the militia," Said the Osa Lt.

"You better report to King Alister" I told him.

The sgt. had told me to report to king allister.
"King allister we are the survivors from the bonta masacre that acourred a few weeks ago, we will help you defend this castle with our own lives". "very well" said the king. So, i told my troops to get ready for battle.

name:zorrion
class pandawa
age:28
rank:new recruit

so,i was just one of the last pandawa bontairian militimen.....and when our commander:taikyo,walked into our camp tent me and my cohort( cohort=5 soldiers)listened to every word he said.i did not like it,he told that we were to attack a what used to be a bontairian military fort(now brakmarian) and we would capture and control in secret so that when the braks would siege amakna castle we would suprise the by attack them from behind. but we knew that we would not be able to do it alone so we persuaded the osa lt. to allow us to take half the enirispas with us.we were to march out this afternoon.these notices were disturbing for this was my first bonta v.s brak battle, and i was nervous.fortunatly there were three other rookies in my cohort witch was comforting.

-------------------LATER----------------------
after a long trudge through the fog that night they decided to camp out behind one of the the large hills in that region,mainly out of the brakmarian fort's sight.



ill write more next time

continuation




the next morning I seemed to have woke up just in time for the roll call.then that was where taikyo started the roll call."cigbol,gertosh,salrumorg,zorrion and galoran?"called taikyo."present"replied the five soldiers."go and join up with cohort B,
there they will go over the battle strategy,then we will attack the fort"said taikyo to the five soldiers."great,another join-up-with-cohort-B-then-strategise-then-attack plan."I thought.once cohort A met up with cohort B they immediatly started discussing the battle plan."the attack will probably be the regular one"i thought, and sure enough it was.pandawas start in groups of two on throw the other onto the fort walls,the ones thrown distract troops while rest of pandawas break down the door and rush through it.then they wipe out the entire defense force and let women and children escape.blah blah blah,these things were not new to me,i had read that this was the regular battle plan.he just wanted to get the battle over with,but they mentioned in the plans that they would attack at night witch was surprising because normally attack at noon but this was the battle plan so i guss i have to wait until midnight.
to be continued

Name: Vedaros
Age: 34
Rank: Captain, Brakmarian Militia
Class: Xelor

Johnny Mustam had almost taken Bonta when I heard the news. Enemies were closing in on Fort Rushu! I whipped my Dragoturkey, and the cavalry rode on. We had to protect the northern front at all costs!

OOC: Brakmar controls the west, Bonta has been taken, and the survivors are defending Amakna. It's West and North vs. Southeast, I think.

so, it was dark out now and the time of the attack was near. the rest of cohort A and cohort B were already out side getting their axes and bottles of boozer.i rushed outside my tent and and saw the rest of my cohort and cohort B getting their twiggy axes or getting their bottles of boozer.i went over and grabbed a twiggy axe.it felt light,mainly the ones used in training are twice the weight of the regular thing. then i walked over to the place where the other pandawas were getting their bottles of boozer. i grabbed five bottles witch was the minimum amount of bottles you could take.for i had been trained to use my axe in battles without the aid of the boozer, so i probably would not use it.then i heard commander takyo make an announcement."dear soldiers it seems cohorts C and D will be fighting with us.(cohort C and D were elite cohorts of many numbers(50 in total to be exact)wile cohort A ad B consisted of only 20 troops) and we discovered that there are around 40 troops patrolling the walls and 100 troops inside."cohort B will throw the members of cohort A onto the front wall and keep the patrolling guards distracted while the members of cohort B wil get the ladders and lay them onto the walls and help cohort A.meanwile cohorts C and D will ram the gate open and charge inside fort rushu,destroying every soldier in their way."announced taikyo.as taikyo dragged on with all the details of the very long announcement I glanced at the watch a xelor gave to me once and it was three minuets to midnight.....................


to be continued

3 days had passed since my troops and i came to castle amakna.

This nigth it was my turn to patrol."Dam i hate patroling, hu what is that", i saw some srams with the brakmarian clothes moving through the forest, i acted instantly and rang the alarm, the enemy was here.....

"You're Srams! SRAMS! And you were spotted in the dead of night?" I yelled. "Now Bonta's going to make a comeback, and we worked for decades to get to this moment! Remind me to demote you after the battle." I spurred my mount, and rode in to face the rebels.

---------------------CONTINUED--------------------


then a drowsy looking pandawa went up to taikyo and wispered something in his ear.then taikyo said:"i have just been informed that brakmarian reinforcements are on their way so we must hurry to capture fort rushu and stall the reinforecments.go now and make the pandawas proud!"."wow",i thought,"this just makes my first battle much much harder,if we dont capture fort rushu in time there wont be any hope of survival". everybody was rushing around at that point to get their weapons an get into batttle formations.i crept through the hustle until i got to my battle position.where taikyo beated on drums and then we said cried out the pandawa battle cry:PANDAGAROSAN!!!!!!!!!! then, cohorts a and b surried to the back where they started throwing cohort a.then cohorts c and d were charging at the gates with their batterring ram,but then i realised i was mixed up with the cohorts c and d and i found myself charging with cohorts c and d!"oh well"i thought,for i was already to late to change my mind anyway!then unexpectingly the gates opened before the battering ram hit the door,witch meant that any guards that were stand in the way........well,you wouldnt want to know what happened to them.the we charged into the fort going as fast as possible to get to the chief of the mitilia so that he could surrender.then i tripped on a rock and i fell flat on my face.once i got up i noticed i was surrounded.cohorts c and d along with general taikyo(who also joined the charge) were already out of sight,charging through the brak soldiers like an arrow slicing through the air.then a hand axe came flying and it chopped off the heads of all the brak soldiers who had surrounded me.then once took in what had just happened with my close-to-death encounter,my best friend(and my only friend)came runnig up to me.he explained to me how he saw me surrounded and threw his hand axe to help me out.when we reached the mitilia we saw a iop with a sword to taikyo's neck.we stopped in our tracks.then a arrow came flying through the air and hit the iops's sword right out of his hand.we all turned to see who had shot the arrow.and who did we see? cigbol!one of the new recruits like me! of course once everything settled down we had once againd picked up our stuff and went to attack the brakmar attack force like planned... i groaned.a battle just finished and we were already getting ready for another one!


after the long trudge to the next battlefield,taikyo gave everyone a bottle of ginger ale.i drank mine as soon as it was handed to me.after that everyone was energiezed and ready to go!then me and the others stared donwn the hill there we saw the brakmarian strike force.then we all cryied the battle cry as we charged down the hill"PANDAGAROSAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"and with that the battle began..................

btw im kinda waiting for dwk or someone else involved in this attack to post further events.

"You know what? F**k demotions." I said as the Bontarians charged, and killed the Srams then and there. "No one can stop us. We are Brakmar!" The troops saluted, and we rode in. Kill, kill, slice, kill, ride, and I came up to the head of the cohort, a young Pandawa officer. Naive little fool. I'd be done with him soon.

----continued-----


as we charged down the hill the brakmarian strike force turned around and tried to do a charge of their own but i was not a very organised one fortunaly for us.then as we charged i came face to face with a sram.quikly i rolled to the right dodging a thrust of his dagger,then i swinged my axe and cut him off his head.once i had done so galoran had caught up with me.then i looked to my left and saw commander taikyo having a face-off with a xelor on a drago turkey.that is when i noticed that the xelor had a belt with 7 stars on it.representing that the xelor was vedaros,a famous general of brakmar.instead of fighting,everyone exept taikyo and vedaro were just standing still.everyone was awestruck as they watched taikyo duel with vedaros.after 5- miuets of axe-hammer clashings,then theire weapons clashed and locked,"you have fought well for a young general, very impressive."says vedaros."you will find me full of surprises!"taikyo replied.then taikyo leaped over vedaros and his dragoturkey and taikyo swung his axe at vedaros,cutting off his right hand.vedaros then with the last peicie of strenght he could muster,he swung his hammer at taikyo and............................



--to be continued------

-On the amakna castle-

I had rang the alarm, enemy srams were inside the castle, i ordered the ecaflips to use perception and the srams to use location. When we finally found the srams they had alredy killed 2 ecaflips and 1 sram.

I ordered the cras to fire their arrows at the enemy, suddenly the main gate fell and enemy troops started moving in, the battle had started.....

This post has been edited by totoquil: 20 Sep 2009, 03:04